Showing posts with label The Cage. Show all posts
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Sunday, November 14, 2010

Thoughts on Season One

Revisiting the original, 1960's Star Trek is worthwhile in a lot of ways. It's always interesting to revisit the beginnings of a franchise, to see the seed from which everything else sprang. It's interesting to see how the characters and universe of Star Trek evolved. It's interesting to take a look back at archive television, to see how different weekly series were more than four decades ago.

But more than that, revisiting the first season of Star Trek has been worthwhile simply because it's a damn good show. More impressively, it's that good right out the gate.


Two Pilots

Of course, just about everyone who'd be interested in looking at Star Trek reviews knows by now that this was a series with two pilots - both of which are thankfully available. Even more fortunate is that both pilots are actually quite good.

Though it was rejected as the basis for the series, The Cage stands up as the stronger of the two as a standalone piece of television. It's a very intelligent piece of television, which cannily mixes a respectable stab at serious science fiction with a healthy dose of action and sexuality. All of these facets would reappear in the series proper, though the sexuality would be transformed from Vena's sensuality to a more juvenile, leering treatment. The Cage holds up remarkably well, and could probably have received a respectable, "B" movie theatrical release in its day.

For all of that, I can't be sorry that the network insisted on the retooling which took effect with Where No Man Has Gone BeforeThis second pilot is far less intellectual, and far more basic. But it does have leads who are easier to empathize with and a crew that has a stronger sense of cameraderie. The Cage is a good mini-movie, but I don't particularly want to spend more time with its characters. Where No Man Has Gone Before presents us with characters who feel as well as just think, and that does make a difference.


Strong Writing

The element that stands out the most about the first season of Star Trek is the writing. It's good. 45 years later, much of the series has dated. The effects look a bit hokey, the backdrops are obvious (though less so in the remastered versions), even the acting has a theatrical quality that by modern standards seems a bit hammy at times. But the show still holds up as good television, and it does so because of the writing.

One of Gene Roddenberry's master strokes was to recruit genuine science fiction writers, people like Robert BlochTheodore Sturgeon, and Harlan Ellison. We get scripts that deal with high concepts ranging from time travel to genetic engineering to alternate realities to meditations on the positive and negative aspects of human nature. With strong script editing, most of these are turned into tight, focused television narratives. Structure is the key, and it's very rare to find a poorly-structured episode of first season Trek. I can only think of one truly sloppily-written episode, and even that had behind-the-scenes complications involving the replacement of a key actor late in the day.

These are literate, intelligent scripts that defy the reputation of Star Trek as something hammy and hokey. The ham and cheese is there, make no mistake of that. But it's a smart show too, one that rarely talks down to the viewer. Not that it always works. One concept that is seriously overplayed in the first season is that of the Enterprise encountering a godlike superbeing. By the time Kirk is receiving a lecture from a golden superbeing in Arena, I'm docking the episode's final score simply because I have grown incredibly weary of superbeings by this point. But the season is one of highly literate teleplays, with allusions to Shakespeare, Melville, Milton, and Faulkner, among others. For all the cheese (which, make no mistake, is itself part of the show's appeal), this is one of the most intelligent series of its era, and should be respected as such.


Actors & Characters

The strongest enduring appeal of the original Star Trek lies with its cast and characters. Unlike later Star Trek series, this is not an ensemble show. Kirk is the lead, and he is at the center of pretty much every episode. Spock is the second lead, and backs Kirk up. When William Shatner has a slightly lighter weak, Spock takes the focus. Both actors are consistently good in their roles, with Shatner both better and more controlled in his acting than reputation would suggest. It takes a few episodes for Leonard Nimoy to fully "find" the character of Spock. By The Naked Time, however, Spock is fully formed, and Nimoy is arguably the cast standout.

That's arguable only because of how good the third member of the "Big Three" is. After the two unsuccessful one-shot doctors featured in The Cage and Where No Man Has Gone Before, the series finally got it right with DeForest Kelly's Dr. McCoy. Introduced as a recurring character, it didn't take long for McCoy to become the series' third lead. Kelly is consistently excellent, with just the right mix of crustiness and compassion to be a good foil for his two co-stars and to be convincing in his role. Writers and actor establish a different dynamic between Kirk and McCoy than what exists between Kirk and Spock or Spock and McCoy. As a result, these three establish a dynamic partnership, with often multiple levels of interaction occuring within the same scene.

Not all is perfect. The loss of Grace Lee Whitney is a blow. Janice is extremely prominent through the first half of the season, and it's clear that she was intended to be the show's female lead. Then she disappears, with her character never so much as mentioned again. Exactly what happened isn't clear, given that there are at least three different stories I've read that all conflict with each other. It is clear that something happened behind the scenes, and it was something pretty nasty. Within the world of the show - which is what I'm reviewing, after all - the loss of Janice robs Kirk of a key character interaction, taking away one of his more interesting vulnerabilities. The evolving interactions with Spock and Dr. McCoy, and the increasing strength of the supporting cast, ultimately make up for it. But I can't help but wonder what the series would have been like had Janice remained in place.


Overall

What more is there really to be said? A "second season wishlist" would seem redundant. My wishlist for Season 2 would simply be that it match the accomplishment of the first season. This is one of the finest first seasons of a television series I think I've seen. It's not flawless. The abrupt loss of someone who was clearly intended to be the series' female lead leaves a slight hole in the second half of the series, and there are at least two too many cases of Kirk & crew encountering superbeings with godlike powers. But it's an outstanding first season, with only one really bad episode and only a couple of others that dip as low as "mediocre."

Really, the only seriously bad thing I can think to say about the first season of Star Trek is that it sets the bar so high, the rest of the series - let alone its spinoffs - can't really hope to match it.


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Saturday, September 25, 2010

#16 (1-11, 1-12): The Menagerie

Spock is court martialed!
Spock is court-martialed!

Original Air Date: Nov. 17 - 24, 1966. Written by: Gene Roddenberry. Directed by: Marc Daniels, Robert Butler.


THE PLOT

When the Enterprise receives an emergency message from Fleet Captain Pike at Starbase 11, Captain Kirk diverts the ship immediately. When he arrives, however, he learns that the Starbase never sent the message, and that Pike would have been incapable of sending it. While conducting a routine inspection of a cadet vessel, Pike was exposed to severe radiation - leaving him paralyzed, unable to move or speak, and only able to communicate from his full-body wheelchair by blinking once for "yes," twice for "no."

It gradually becomes clear that the message was a fake - and that it was sent by Spock! The Vulcan uses his considerable skills to take over the Enterprise and, with Pike in tow, puts the ship on course for a forbidden destination: Talos IV. Kirk and Starbase 11's commander, Commodore Mendez (Malachi Throne), stubbornly pursue in a shuttlecraft, refusing to turn back even when they have reached the limit of their fuel reserves. Spock cannot bring himself to leave them to die. He rescues his pursuers and surrenders himself, making only one request: an immediate court martial.

The court martial is convened, with Kirk, Mendez, and Pike presiding. Spock's defense is an impossibly detailed chronicle of Pike's mission to Talos IV. But when it is discovered that this is actually a transmission, being sent to the ship from Talos IV, the situation goes from serious to dire. Any communication with this planet is punishable by death - meaning that Spock has literally put his neck in the hangman's noose, and he just may drag Kirk's career down with him!


CHARACTERS

Captain Kirk: It is interesting to compare and contrast Pike and Kirk.  Season One Shatner has a natural screen presence, commanding his scenes effortlessly. His interactions with co-stars Leonard Nimoy and DeForest Kelly, and even with guest star Malachi Throne as Mendez, are marked by a warmth that was missing from Jeffrey Hunter's Pike - a difference that becomes instantly apparent once Spock's court martial begins. Pike's weariness, burnout, and fascination with Vina in the footage from The Cage is more interesting than any of Kirk's material in this episode, but Kirk comes across as a better fit for a television series lead.

Spock: It's also interesting to contrast the fully formed Spock that Leonard Nimoy had perfected by this point in the series against the prototypical version of The Cage. In the original pilot, he's not only bizarrely emotional, he also has a tendency to shout his lines. In the new footage, though Nimoy is now portraying a character who refuses to betray emotion, he seems more relaxed in his deliveries. There's a variance in tone and pitch that keeps him engaging. I particularly liked the final scene of Part One, when Spock draws on his friendship with Kirk to keep the captain from shutting down the trial. "Don't stop me. Don't let (Mendez) stop me." He doesn't show emotion, as such, but we still can sense his friendship with Kirk along with a distinct, if quiet, urgency.

Dr. McCoy: His reaction to Spock turning himself over for arrest is a highlight. Despite their verbal sparring, it is clear that McCoy trusts Spock almost as intrinsically as Kirk does, and he cannot believe that Spock would betray the captain. Outside of that, his role is pretty minor, though he gets a nice moment in which he laments the lack of insight into the workings of the human brain.


THOUGHTS

I had remembered The Menagerie as being largely just a "clip show," with a minimal amount of original footage framing a showing of The Cage. As someone once said, "the memory cheats." The first part of this 2-parter is almost entirely new. Spock's taking of the Enterprise doesn't come across as something to rush through to get to the clips. The episode takes some time with it, and the theft of the ship is actually rather compelling. It must have been startling on first showing, when viewers would have had no idea what Spock's plan was or why he was doing this.

I would actually rate the mostly original Part One as the stronger of the two episodes, benefiting from strong pacing and a genuine sense of intrigue and urgency. I'll admit that Part Two suffers for this review, given that I watched it not long after watching The Cage. But in Part Two, even the new footage starts to falter, with Spock, Kirk, and company providing bland recaps of the action after each commercial fadeout, and with a "tag" scene that does feel quite rushed (all I can say is, the transporter room must be directly adjacent to the room in which the court martial was held).

The Cage itself has been pruned. Not surprisingly, since the new context makes the Pike-centric material the absolute focus, most of the scenes not featuring him have been either severely shortened or removed entirely. There have also been tweaks within scenes, minor edits that seem to target potential arguments against Spock's decision. In the re-enactment of Pike's battle on Rigel 7, Vina no longer includes in her pleas with Pike to fight the giant, "Do you know what he'll do to me?" This may have been in part to cut a suggestion of a rape threat, but it also sidesteps the suggestion that the Talosians would allow the illusion to play out to such an extent.

The Talosians' "punishment" remains in the episode, one senses that the new context of The Menagerie makes it less desirable for viewers to dwell on that aspect. In the simulation of a picnic at Pike's family home, the exchange in which Vina tries to forestall Pike's questioning by reminding him of her "headaches" has been removed, along with Pike's remark that the "headaches" would be "hereditary."  Even the Talosian leader's final words to Kirk - a more or less direct lift from his (its?) final words to Pike at the end of The Cage - have been made more benign, complete with the addition of a kindly smile and head bow.

The results may fit better with the new footage, but they also make the old story feel watered-down. I don't think it's entirely because of the rapid viewing of this after The Cage that the story seemed less compelling as presented here. I think the distraction of the (in Part Two, often pointless) Kirk/Spock/Mendez scenes, combined with the sanding off of some of the edges from the original version, reduced the effectiveness of the story.

Despite these niggles, both old story and new are well-told stories that are well presented. It's a good episode... but I don't think the end result is quite as good as The Cage was in its original form.


Rating: 7/10.

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Saturday, July 31, 2010

#1 (0-0): The Cage

The Talosians use their mental powers to
trap the captain of the Enterprise!

Original Air Date: Oct. 4, 1988. Written by: Gene Roddenberry. Directed by: Robert Butler.


Captain Christopher Pike (Jeffrey Hunter) meets a nice girl but has trouble with her family.


PLOT

Capt. Christopher Pike (Jeffrey Hunter) of the U. S. S. Enterprise is thinking of resigning.  The ship is returning from a particularly bloody mission that ended in the deaths of crew members, and Pike feels depressed and weary.  Then the Enterprise receives a distress call from a ship crashing on the planet Talos IV.

Though the message is approximately twenty years old, the Enterprise crew find survivors, ones who are in remarkably good health. Among these is Vina (Susan Oliver), a lovely young woman who takes an instant liking to Pike. She insists on showing him the reason for the survivors' good fortune - and then springs a trap, ensnaring the captain even as all that the crew have seen is revealed to be illusion. No survivors, no encampment - just tricks of the mind, played by an alien intelligence.

Pike finds himself in a cage, unable to escape, his every thought read by the telepathic Talosians. Oddly, Vina is still there, insisting that she is as real as he is. The Talosians proceed to use their mental powers to put Pike into a series of illusory settings: the combat Pike recently experienced, a pastoral scene at Pike's childhood home, and finally a smuggler's den, with Pike in the role of Pirate King. In each new scene, Vina is there - to be protected, or cherished, or even owned as his property, should he choose to claim her. Pike resists... but as the experiences grow more and more tantalizing, he finds that resistance weakening...

Capt. Christopher Pike (Jeffrey Hunter) is briefed by his officers.

CHARACTERS

Captain One-Shot: Jeffrey Hunter brings a more naturalistic acting style to Pike than his successor would to Kirk. Pike is a bit world-weary (universe-weary?) as the episode begins, clearly an experienced leader who is starting to cross that blurry line between "seasoned" and simply "burned-out." This had the potential to be developed in interesting ways, had Hunter elected to stay on for the second pilot. However, Pike isn't a very warm character, and the one thing this pilot doesn't do is provide him much interaction with the other would-be regulars. Based on what's here, I'm not sure audiences would have taken to him. I half-suspect a Jeffrey Hunter Star Trek might have lasted only one season, instead of three. Still, he's good in this episode, and the series is a richer place for having had Pike, if only for a very short while.

Spock: Early Spock is surprisingly emotional, grinning openly at a strange alien flower. He also reacts to the captain's kidnapping with a brashness that seems unusual, given where the character would be taken. Leonard Nimoy's performance is adequate, but nothing special here, and he has a regrettable tendency to shout half his lines. It's a good thing he improved so quickly. Certainly, one sees little evidence here of a character or performance who would become the stuff of science-fiction legend.

The Enterprise Crew: A bland bunch, really. I respect Gene Roddenberry's desire to break barriers with a female first officer. Unfortunately, I can't help but agree with the network's assertion that Majel Barrett wasn't the best actress, at least not here. The young yeoman is obviously the prototype for Janice Rand, only dimmer (and not actually very attractive, at least not to my tastes). The doctor has a tendency to strike poses when on-camera, and I am very grateful that this proved to be his only episode. For characters who were clearly intended as regulars, none of them are very well-served by a plot that focuses all its attention on the lead's interaction with a guest actress.

Vina (Susan Oliver) tries to tempt Pike into accepting his captivity.

THOUGHTS

Though that last paragraph points to one of The Cage's deficiencies as a pilot, in its failure to lay much groundwork for the regular cast's interactions, taken on its own the story holds up remarkably well. In fact, I suspect it plays better today than it did to test audiences in the 1960's. The script is both clever and thoughtful, with a resolution that defies expectations. The aliens are not simply evil monsters; they have motivations that are well-explained and even moderately sympathetic. It is also well-structured, with revelations doled out to Pike and the audience at the same time, at a gradual enough pace for an audience unfamiliar with science fiction to absorb, but not so gradually as to make the audience restless. Plus, there's at least one whopping big (and moderately well-staged) action scene thrown in for the plebs.

Susan Oliver does a strong job in the primary guest role. She has considerable chemistry with Jeffrey Hunter, and manages to create a character who is reasonably consistent, while at the same time changing her from one scenario to the next (mysterious wild child; pleading victim; lovely housewife; exotic slave girl; and fellow captive). The episode's content is surprisingly sexually overt for archive television... which was apparently one of the factors in its rejection, though it also makes it more interesting and less dated than most archive television of the era.

I have no idea which effects were changed for the remastered version of this episode, which indicates that the remastering team did their job well in this instance. The episode as a whole looks very good, and I suspect enjoyed a far higher budget than would be allowed for the rest of the series.


Rating: 8/10. An intriguing look at the series that might have been. I'm just as happy that what might have been, wasn't... but it is startling how little this particular slice of 45 (or more) year old television has dated.

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